Work with me / Offer 01
Patient Comprehension and Usability Review
I check whether the patients your product was built for can understand it and finish what they came to do. Fixed scope, fixed price, and a report you can hand to whoever will do the fixing.
$3,500 · two weeks | $6,500 with patient sessionsWhat I check
Before I start, we agree on three to five things a patient needs to be able to do, written in your words. Everything I find is tied to one of them. You also tell me who the product is for: the condition, the ages, the reading level you expect, the languages, the devices they use. If that has not been decided yet, that becomes the first thing in the report.
Can a patient read it?
I measure the reading level of each passage rather than one average for the whole thing, because the most difficult paragraph is often the one that tells someone what to do. I also check whether medical words are explained the first time they appear, and whether costs and risks are given as numbers a person can use.
Can they tell what to do?
What to do, in what order, by when, what happens if they do not, and who to call if something goes wrong. I also check that the directions say what a patient needs to have on hand before they begin. An insurance card left in the car, or a photo ID that is not within reach, is enough to stop the whole thing.
Can they finish?
Understanding what to do and being able to do it are not the same thing. I go through each task the way a patient would, including what happens when they type something wrong, when they get interrupted and come back later, and when they are doing it one-handed on a phone.
Can patients with disabilities do the same things?
I go through each task with a screen reader, then again using only the keyboard, and check color contrast, zoom, form labels, and error messages. An automated accessibility scan cannot tell you this. It checks the code and cannot see whether a person got to the end.
How I decide how serious a problem is
How serious a finding is depends on what could happen to the patient, not on how badly a page scored. There is a fixed list of rules. I work down it in order and use the first one that applies. The report names the rule behind every rating, so if you disagree with one, you can argue with the rule instead of taking my word for it.
| Rating | What it means |
|---|---|
| Critical | A patient could be harmed, could lose access to care, or could be misled about what something costs, what the risks are, what they are agreeing to, or how to take a medication. |
| Major | A patient cannot finish without help from another person, or finishes with the wrong idea of what they just did. |
| Minor | Slower, harder, or more confusing, but the patient still gets it right. |
| Note | Worth improving at some point. Nothing went wrong for a patient here. |
- Anything about medication, emergencies, what a patient is agreeing to, or what they will pay starts at Critical.
- If there is a way around the problem but it means calling someone or asking staff for help, it stays Major. Needing a person is a problem with the product.
- One Critical finding decides the verdict, however well everything else scored.
How I check it
- I go through every screen and page against a written checklist, item by item, so a score is a measurement rather than my impression of a page.
- I measure reading level with three standard formulas and report all three, because they disagree with each other and one number on its own is misleading. Before I say a passage is too difficult to understand, I rewrite it once, keeping every medical term you have to keep, and measure again. If it becomes easier to read, the problem is the sentences. If it does not, the problem is the vocabulary, and the fix is to explain those words rather than remove them.
- I read each path once at normal speed, then write down without looking back what to do, when, what happens next, and who to call. Whatever I cannot recall is something a patient is unlikely to find.
- I go through each task, including the two situations where things usually break: someone enters something wrong, and someone leaves and comes back the next day.
- In the version with patient sessions, I ask each person to tell me in their own words what they would do. I report how many got it right out of how many I asked. With six or eight people, counts are honest and percentages are not.
The checklist is built on published federal tools for plain language and patient education, and on the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines 2.1 Level AA. Every one of them is named in the report. The rules for deciding how serious a problem is, and for reaching a verdict, are mine.
What you get
- A one-page summary with the verdict and the serious problems, written so it still makes sense to someone who reads only that page.
- Every problem I found, in order of how serious it is, with the evidence attached: the measurement, the screenshot, or the quote. Each one says what to do about it. If I cannot show you the evidence, it does not go in the report.
- A fix list in the order I would fix them, which is the part your engineering or content lead works from.
- A 45-minute call to go through it with you.
- One round of corrections after you have read it.
If I find something that could cause harm, you hear about it that day rather than at the end.
How long it takes
Going through the product
I pin the review to one version, so a finding is never written against a screen that has since changed. Then I work through the four checks in order: reading level, then whether the actions are clear, then whether they can be completed, then accessibility.
Scoring, writing, and the call
I score everything, decide the verdict from the findings, write the report, and send it. Then we spend 45 minutes on the serious problems and the fix list.
Two weeks means ten working days, and they start the day I get access to the product, not the day you sign. The version with patient sessions takes four to five weeks, because finding and scheduling patients sits in the middle of it.
What it costs
Two-week review
$3,500- Covers
- 3 to 5 patient tasks, up to 40 screens or 25 pages
- Evidence
- My review against the written checklist
- Takes
- 2 weeks
- Best for
- A pilot, a launch, or a funder who is about to look
Review with patient sessions
$6,500- Covers
- 3 to 5 patient tasks, up to 70 screens or 45 pages
- Evidence
- My review, plus sessions with 6 to 8 patients, at least two of whom use assistive technology
- Takes
- 4 to 5 weeks
- Best for
- A submission that has to show real patients used it, including a Phase II application
For the version with sessions, finding participants and paying them is quoted separately. What you pay each person changes who agrees to come, not only how many, and a low payment tends to reach the patients your product already works well for. We decide that together before I start.
What is not included
- Whether the medical content is correct. That is your clinical team’s call, not mine.
- Legal, regulatory, or compliance sign-off. This review supports that work; it does not certify anything.
- Material in any language other than English, unless we add a reviewer who is fluent in that language.
- A full accessibility conformance audit of your codebase, or the formal report that goes with it.
- Making the changes. I tell you what to fix; your team fixes it.
More tasks, a second look after you make changes, a later version of the product, and training your team to use the checklist are all things I can do. Each is quoted separately.
Example review
An example review, from start to finish
One coverage page, reviewed and rewritten, with the before and after printed in full and every readability figure checkable. The rewrite drops the reading level by about thirteen grades while keeping words like Medicaid and waiver on the page.
Coming soon. If you want to see it now, ask and I will send it
Terms
- Payment
- Half when you sign, half when I deliver.
- Start date
- Start date kicks off once access is confirmed. This is separate from the signature date.
- Changes to the scope
- Priced and agreed before I start on them.
- Corrections
- One round. More tasks, a second look, and later versions are quoted separately.
- Urgent findings
- Anything that could cause harm reaches you the day I find it.
- Version
- The report stays tied to the version it describes.
Start with the conversation.
Tell me what you built and who it is for. If a review is not what you need, I will say so and point you to someone better suited.